Body and Soul -- Chapter 4 (fixed?)
Dec. 6th, 2007 12:00 pmChapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
This is a re-write of the Chapter 4 originally posted here. I'd like to know whether Stephanie's reaction is more believable now.
( original fiction, feedback desired )
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
This is a re-write of the Chapter 4 originally posted here. I'd like to know whether Stephanie's reaction is more believable now.
( original fiction, feedback desired )